A Christmas Carol Essay with Corrections

Prompt: "Dickens shows the readers that the most important things in life cannot be measured" This is one of my essays corrected by my teacher. I've highlighted the bits that needed to be expanded on. Otherwise I think it's a helpful essay if you're struggling to find points to talk about, or just simple quotes and examples. I've related back to the topic fairly well and am pretty happy with this essay! Hope it helps, good luck to those in Year 12! :)