Teacher comments: This is a skilful response, showing insight and excellent attachments to the question for the most part. Very occasionally did you need to reference back to the Q a little more and be more explicit in your explanations, but language is academic and mature. A very encouraging essay! Just avoid listing ideas—try to link more smoothly between.
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