Sigh... More than likely, somebody will feel sorry for you and point you in the right direction. They will essentially spoonfeed you what you need without your having done an iota of work. I'm going to impugn "I am not saying what I have written purely because I don't want peolpe thinking on the same lines as I am (corrupting their pure train of thought). Thus once I get some thoughts, I will start discussing me own ideas." as bs, because it's common knowledge that you only learn through making mistakes. Only through seeing where you're going wrong can you truly be helped.
Consider this: If somebody TELLS you what language techniques they've found without you even trying to find them yourself, how sure are you that you'll be able to spot them when they come up more subtly in another piece? Having someone spot the techniques for you, as well as getting them to do all your work also inhibits your ability to independently learn how to identify said techniques in the future.
Since you won't reply, I'm hoping that the people reading this will not waste their time on these pieces until Costargh shows that he's also made an effort. The point of VCENotes is to help, not to spoonfeed.