Is someone able to give me some feedback on this essay response below;
‘Meaningful discoveries can offer opportunities to change the course of an individual’s life.’
How is this view of discovery represented in your prescribed text and one related text of your own choosing?
Transformative discoveries are catalysts for change, which are often the most meaningful and impactful. Ernest ‘Che’ Guevara’s memoir The Motorcycle Diaries demonstrates how through his exploration and journey, Guevara was able to discover the social injustices in Latin America and ignite his revolutionary nature in the future. Contrastingly, Elie Wiesel’s ‘speech’ is intended to educate about the adversity he faced as a Jew during World War Two. While both texts aim to teach about hardship, Guevara does so as an outsider who is learning whereas Wiesel does so as an insider who has experienced. These meaningful discoveries explored by both Guevara and Wiesel allow them to transform their lives and acquire deeper understandings, but also their discoveries may illicit change in a broader society.
Meaningful discoveries are thought provoking and can prompt action. In The Motorcycle Diaries, Guevara’s discovery of stark class disaparities nurture his capacity for empathic connection and enriches his burgeoning social awareness. Guevara is initially portrayed as youthful and innocent and this allows for transfromations and personal growth. His characterisation of naivete is further shown through his daughter Aleida’s description of him in the preface ‘his thirst for knowledge and his great capacity for love shows us how reality… can permeate a human being to the point of changing his thinking’ this heavily foreshadows future events in the text and has positive connotations to what Guevara is to discover. His preconceptions and privilieged background are juxtaposed by his encounter of the asthmatic woman who only has “a couple of armchairs, her only luxury items” that symbolise her lower socio-economic status and leave him confronted with his ignorance and lack of awareness to people less fortunate than him. He repeatedly characterises her as a ‘poor woman’ demonstrates his development of empathy later drives Guevara to treat the lepers without gloves or protection “the psychological lift it gives tese people, treating them as normal human beings rather than animals… is incalcuble.” This emotive language that he also used in past experiences highlights his growing social awareness and deeper understanding of the world and the people surrounding him. These experiences affirm that his transformative and insightful discovery of the asthmatic woman motivated him to not just think and sympathise with, but to strive to help the downtrodden. Guevara also reevaluates his preconceived notions of his adventure and where it would take him and galvanise him to act and to help the less fortunate.
Guevara’s transformation is comparable to Wiesel’s ‘The Perils of Indifference’ in that both are didactic texts which aim to teach responders. Wiesel, like Guevara uses his experiences to illuminate issues of social importance and also seeks to facilitate change and improved understanding of the world. Wiesel was forced to discover the harsh realities of the world at a young age and was propelled into hardship by the second World War, and unlike Guevara, he is the one who experiences the difficulty of life, not one who witnesses it. Wiesel repeatedly shows animosity towards indifference about social and political issues through his firm tone, “It is so much easier to look away from victims. It is so much easier to avoid such rude interruptions to our work, our dreams, our hopes,” which is an allusion to Guevara’s once nescient behaviour. Wiesel’s motif of resentment towards indifference is shown throughout the poem as he chronicles his experiences during the holocaust and exposes those who remained indifferent to what was occuring and how society must transform and discover the negative impact of indifference. “Therefore, indifference is always the friend of the enemy, for it benefits the aggressor - never his victim, whose pain is magnified when he or she feels forgotten.” Through diction, Wiesel’s opinions and beliefs can be likened to Guevara’s, which symbolise their similar discoveries of emotional and intellectual importance where they stand united with the people and make transformative discoveries that will undoubtedly provoke action and enable speculation about the future in the wider society.
Meaningful and transformative discoveries such as the ones in The Motorcycle Diaries and ‘The Perils of Indifference’ have the most impact on individuals and will shape not only their opinions and values, but their outlook on the world and what they can do to change it. These inspiring journeys allow both Guevara and Wiesel to harbour the desire to help and ignite change in the world and these discoveries also have emotional, intellectual and political meaning. The discoveries impact both Guevara and Wiesel on such an extensive level that they allow what they discover to change their opinions and worldviews and how they can facilitate change and better society.