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February 26, 2021, 05:55:19 am

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English Online Essay
« on: April 16, 2020, 05:19:03 pm »
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Hi,

This is my English assignment for IA1. I have to write an online literary essay about a key concept that is both in the play Cosi and the film Little Miss Sunshine. I am focusing on the concept of normality versus abnormality. We are writing for "The Guardian", where an upcoming series of essays will celebrate Cosi - so that's why I have focused on Cosi but supported and shown differences with Little Miss Sunshine as well.

Thanks so much in advance!

Grace

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Re: English Online Essay
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2020, 07:26:36 am »
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Hi Grace,

I would be more than happy to look over it for you :)
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Re: English Online Essay
« Reply #2 on: April 20, 2020, 08:08:43 am »
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Hi Grace,

I'm sorry it took so long but I have finished adding comments and suggestions to your essay. Please don't hesitate to contact me via private messages on the ATAR Notes website or through my email: [email protected] if you have any questions, queries or concerns about the feedback.

Thank you,

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Re: English Online Essay
« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2020, 08:35:02 am »
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Hi Darcy,

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. The help was greatly appreciated!

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Re: English Online Essay
« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2020, 09:09:41 am »
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No problem.

I was more than happy to help :)
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