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#### dashnog

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##### Mind helping me mark my own work?
« on: May 17, 2018, 10:34:36 pm »
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I just finished a Legal Study case, although in Year 10, I think this is the only board that critiquing of this would fit into. Attached is the document, and the cover sheet is taken straight from the assigned task. Do you think I could achieve maximum marks according to this, or do I need to delve deeper?
Year 11 at Beaconhills College.

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#### MissSmiley

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##### Re: Mind helping me mark my own work?
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2018, 10:45:34 pm »
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I just finished a Legal Study case, although in Year 10, I think this is the only board that critiquing of this would fit into. Attached is the document, and the cover sheet is taken straight from the assigned task. Do you think I could achieve maximum marks according to this, or do I need to delve deeper?
Did you have a word limit for this assignment?

Because you've written a LOT !!
(which is good, but I haven't gone through it like full on, but I reckon you could cut down a bit of the case summary. Right now it's just a bit too much for 5 marks)

But yeah, would love to read it
(and I'll see if I can cut your words down a bit

Because as you go into Year 11 and 12, you need to make answers for Legal punchy, not too wordy + get full marks for that answer.

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