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May 24, 2018, 08:17:46 pm

Author Topic: How To Avoid Sounding Too Mechanical In Language Analysis  (Read 108 times)  Share 

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Captn Cook

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How To Avoid Sounding Too Mechanical In Language Analysis
« on: May 16, 2018, 11:59:02 pm »
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Hey Guys,
My teacher recently said my language analysis essays are sounding too "wooden" and mechanical.  Essentially what I tend to do is I talk about a technique then I talk about how the reader might respond in the same cycle throughout each of my body paragraphs. I know there are ways such as varying sentence lengths which could help the writing sound less cumbersome but are there other ways besides mixing up sentence lengths to enlighten a language analysis essay? Thanks!!!

Ed_ward

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Re: How To Avoid Sounding Too Mechanical In Language Analysis
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2018, 11:20:59 pm »
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Hi,

Can you give us an example?