For this would this be fine for relating characteristics of structure to function
Hey Chocolatepistachio,
Your answers and good, but a way of elevating them would be to emphasise the way that the structure enables the function.
I know that the space to write is really tiny, so this may not all fit, but for the chloroplasts, you could write something along the lines of: The chlorophyll pigment in the thylakoids allows light energy to be absorbed, powering the light-dependent reactions within the disks.
In my answer I've focused on the two features given in the question and how working together they assist chloroplasts to perform their function (photosynthesising and producing glucose).
In the answer you've given for ribosomes, a way of shifting the focus would be to discuss the second structural point they gave about the location of ribosomes. You could highlight how free ribosomes can produce and release proteins directly where they are needed in the cytosol of the cell and ribosomes studding the ER can release them to be modified and transported before eventually being packaged into vesicles and released through exocytosis.
Hope that this helps!