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charmanderp

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Discussion of werdna's piece in the Worked Examples Thread
« on: November 01, 2012, 04:34:29 pm »
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Do you mind sharing what you think the mark was lost for? That piece seems perfect!


Mod edit: split, that thread is not for discussion
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Re: Discussion of werdna's piece in the Worked Examples Thread
« Reply #1 on: November 01, 2012, 04:56:00 pm »
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Do you mind sharing what you think the mark was lost for? That piece seems perfect!

Wow thanks Chemderp! Can't really remember exactly but I think it was something like acknowledging more of the short story cycle and making some more links to the collection as a whole, and not just as separate stories. :)

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Re: Discussion of werdna's piece in the Worked Examples Thread
« Reply #2 on: November 01, 2012, 05:16:36 pm »
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Ooh I didn't realise they were short stories (putting the derp in Chemderp)! Thank you (:
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