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Author Topic: Cosi Text Response Essay - Feedback?  (Read 1085 times)  Share 

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Cosi Text Response Essay - Feedback?
« on: July 12, 2012, 02:37:20 pm »
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Hey guys,
After reading this essay, would you have any constructive criticism and tips?
much appreciated  :)

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Re: Cosi Text Response Essay - Feedback?
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2012, 10:46:28 am »
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Really good essay. Intro was excellent. You might want to consider mentioning Julie in the second paragraph as being in Cosi Fan Tutte was an escape from being in the ward and she actually liked doing it.. there are some good quotes to back that up. Overall, your points are good but the one thing I'm going to question is that did Ruth really stop being obsessive? Because it turns out her obsessiveness becomes an asset that leads to a career (Time and motion expert) ..
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