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Oral Feedback
« on: June 28, 2019, 09:13:42 pm »
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Hi there,

I am looking for someone experienced to provide feedback on my oral speech soon. I don't want to post the speech as it will appear on google, the teachers at my school do check for plagiarism so i don't want to risk it. I am willing to pay a small fee or give something in exchange. In total I will need feedback on 2-3 drafts.

I'll also be needing someone to correct practice essays (many) in the months leading to exams, again I'm willing to pay a fee.

Thanks
« Last Edit: June 29, 2019, 02:35:17 pm by Just another student »

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Re: Oral Essay Feedback
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2019, 08:24:55 am »
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Hey,

Given that you wrote "oral essay" as your topic I want to reinforce to you that your oral speech should not be a spoken essay. Even when written you should be able to tell if a text is a speech due to the different structure and techniques you'll be using. If this is something you're going to struggle with I encourage you to pay particular attention to how you will be pausing & changing your tone as you speech.

Good luck!