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Re: Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #240 on: March 31, 2017, 01:25:27 am »
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Nah that's not necessary :) I mean including a historians quote would be fine (I would be hesitant to include quotes that went against your argument however as you don't want it to be percieved as you making a split judgement!), but you can still get a fantastic mark without them! It would definitely be nice though to find a couple of quotes from historians or even Lenin himself that support your argument!

Some good quotes I can think of off the top of my head (I can't believe I remember them still!):
- “[The Provisional Government in comparison to the Bolsheviks] had no popular mandate and little popular support.” ~ AJP Taylor.
- “[the Bolsheviks were] saddled by the imperative conditions of war-time.” ~ Lenin on War Communism.
- “We had to show the peasants that we could and would quickly change our policy to alleviate their want” ~ Lenin on the NEP.

I think it would be:

Lenin, V. 1917, 'The Tasks of the Proletariat in the Present Revolution', April Theses, Pravda, Moscow.

Though I'm not 100% sure (particularly the 'April Theses' bit - the guide I found for theses only gave the example for PHD theses  :-\). If you're ever in doubt, just reference it as a website - they're unlikely to care/check too much in high school (uni on the other hand... :P)

Omg you're a legend thank you so much!! This has saved my life I swear haha, I was so confused about how to go about the question and the incorporation of quotes but you've cleared that up so thank you ahh
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« Reply #241 on: April 01, 2017, 09:03:41 pm »
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Hey! Under the (incredibly long) dotpoint of the role of propaganda, terror and repression, SA and SS + opposition to Nazism, we've been told that we need to make notes on minority groups and Eisatzgruppen Waffen SS. We haven't covered these in class, so does someone mind explaining to me what these are?

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Re: Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #242 on: April 12, 2017, 08:55:34 pm »
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Hey! Under the (incredibly long) dotpoint of the role of propaganda, terror and repression, SA and SS + opposition to Nazism, we've been told that we need to make notes on minority groups and Eisatzgruppen Waffen SS. We haven't covered these in class, so does someone mind explaining to me what these are?

Thank you!

Hey! Sorry for the late reply - post got lost  :-\ Hope this isn't too late for your half yearlies!

I didn't study Germany, so I can't really explain them, however just wanted to let you know that we have a heap load of Germany notes/essays here! :) If your question is on a specific dotpoint or section of the syllabus, I'd venture a guess that some of these may cover it :D

Sorry I can't be of more help!

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Re: Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #243 on: April 25, 2017, 07:19:55 pm »
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Hi, how many words should you write for a 25 mark essay? Are 800 words enough?

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« Reply #244 on: April 25, 2017, 07:28:29 pm »
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Hi, how many words should you write for a 25 mark essay? Are 800 words enough?

Heya!

Rule of thumb is that you should be aiming for a minimum of 1000 words. That is what a lot of markers will be expecting, and (according to my teacher) if they feel that your essay is too short they can mark you down on the basis that it lacks detail. Tbh I do believe that you would struggle to incorporate the necessary amount of detail in 800 words. I'm sure some could, but that essay would have to be hella succinct. On average mine were around 1100 words.

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Re: Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #245 on: April 26, 2017, 08:03:56 pm »
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Hey Susie,
We just started the Soviet Foreign Policy today and I am a bit unsure as to the content that fits under the two dot points/
The first dot point asks for the
'Changing nature of Soviet foreign policy: aims and strategies 1917 - 1941'
My teacher told me that the aims were 'Survival' for the Bolshevik Party and 'Spread' (of Communism) and that they were contradictory and shifted depending on the political climate and circumstances of the Soviet Union. Eg. Russia used the Treaty of Brest Litovsk for survival and retreated from major bodies of power, creating 'peace' with the strong, because at this time it was 'weak' and the Bolsheviks needed to consolidate power. And when the Soviet Union gained strength they would use occupation and war and ideally 'spread' communism.
Is that correct?
For the strategies is that detailing the various phases of the Policy??
And is there anything else you'd recommend noting?

For the seconds dot point,
'Impact of changing ideology on Soviet foreign policy 1917–1941'
We have completely skimmed over this dot point and have no clue as to what it's all about..

Thankyou!

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Re: Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #246 on: April 26, 2017, 08:16:13 pm »
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Hey Susie,
We just started the Soviet Foreign Policy today and I am a bit unsure as to the content that fits under the two dot points/
The first dot point asks for the
'Changing nature of Soviet foreign policy: aims and strategies 1917 - 1941'
My teacher told me that the aims were 'Survival' for the Bolshevik Party and 'Spread' (of Communism) and that they were contradictory and shifted depending on the political climate and circumstances of the Soviet Union. Eg. Russia used the Treaty of Brest Litovsk for survival and retreated from major bodies of power, creating 'peace' with the strong, because at this time it was 'weak' and the Bolsheviks needed to consolidate power. And when the Soviet Union gained strength they would use occupation and war and ideally 'spread' communism.
Is that correct?
For the strategies is that detailing the various phases of the Policy??
And is there anything else you'd recommend noting?

For the seconds dot point,
'Impact of changing ideology on Soviet foreign policy 1917–1941'
We have completely skimmed over this dot point and have no clue as to what it's all about..

Thankyou!


Hey hey! That is exactly correct :) Whenever I wrote Soviet Foreign policy essays, I always focused on this contradiction, my judgement usually being that the aim of 'survival' usually won out. And yes, strategies refers to how the Soviet Union implemented foreign policy in order to achieve these aims :) So signing the Treaty of Rapollo, the Nazi-Soviet pact etc. etc.

In regards to the second dot point - the reason that you feel like you skipped over it is that it is actually part of the first haha. Changing ideology essentially refers to, on a macro level Permanent Revolution to Socialism-in-on-country, and on a micro level the aim to survive or spread :) So how did these ideologies impact upon the implementation of foreign policy (what it did was impact the aims - so essentially part of the first dot point haha).

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« Reply #247 on: April 26, 2017, 08:27:26 pm »
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Hey hey! That is exactly correct :) Whenever I wrote Soviet Foreign policy essays, I always focused on this contradiction, my judgement usually being that the aim of 'survival' usually won out. And yes, strategies refers to how the Soviet Union implemented foreign policy in order to achieve these aims :) So signing the Treaty of Rapollo, the Nazi-Soviet pact etc. etc.

In regards to the second dot point - the reason that you feel like you skipped over it is that it is actually part of the first haha. Changing ideology essentially refers to, on a macro level Permanent Revolution to Socialism-in-on-country, and on a micro level the aim to survive or spread :) So how did these ideologies impact upon the implementation of foreign policy (what it did was impact the aims - so essentially part of the first dot point haha).

Susie

Thankyou for that!
So the second dot point is essentially how the government's political aims were used to adapt and constantly change the foreign policy to suit these aims and how these aims impacted the policy. Which is essentially that it went through various phases and adaptations, which can be noted through various treaties and events in the timeline??

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Re: Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #248 on: April 26, 2017, 08:36:35 pm »
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Thankyou for that!
So the second dot point is essentially how the government's political aims were used to adapt and constantly change the foreign policy to suit these aims and how these aims impacted the policy. Which is essentially that it went through various phases and adaptations, which can be noted through various treaties and events in the timeline??

Exactly! Wow, you're really getting this Jess, do you have a tutor?  ;) (but in all seriousness that is exactly what it is well done - usually takes most people forever to understand this!).

Yeah so basically how is the implementation of foreign policy going to be different when the ideology is Permanent Revolution in comparison to Socialism-in-one-country? What contextual issues eg. WW1, Civil War, etc would influence the Bolsheviks to adapt their policy from either survival of state to spread of communism? That is basically what the second dot point covers.

I think its a good idea though to decide for yourself which aim won over - survival or spread. This will help when constructing your argument, and will make sure that the marker doesn't think that you are sitting on the fence throughout your essay :)

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« Reply #249 on: April 26, 2017, 08:41:55 pm »
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Exactly! Wow, you're really getting this Jess, do you have a tutor?  ;) (but in all seriousness that is exactly what it is well done - usually takes most people forever to understand this!).

Yeah so basically how is the implementation of foreign policy going to be different when the ideology is Permanent Revolution in comparison to Socialism-in-one-country? What contextual issues eg. WW1, Civil War, etc would influence the Bolsheviks to adapt their policy from either survival of state to spread of communism? That is basically what the second dot point covers.

I think its a good idea though to decide for yourself which aim one over - survival or spread. This will help when constructing your argument, and will make sure that the marker doesn't think that you are sitting on the fence throughout your essay :)

Susie



HAHAHAA I see what you did there
That makes so much more sense!!
Thanks Susie! :)

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« Reply #250 on: April 26, 2017, 08:43:31 pm »
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HAHAHAA I see what you did there
That makes so much more sense!!
Thanks Susie! :)

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« Reply #251 on: April 27, 2017, 12:38:38 pm »
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Can anyone please explain or provide a detailed explanation regarding how exactly I should be analysing a source in Modern?
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« Reply #252 on: April 27, 2017, 01:07:19 pm »
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Can anyone please explain or provide a detailed explanation regarding how exactly I should be analysing a source in Modern?
hey hey Chloe! Excellent question :) Modern markers are pedantic AF, so its really important to have a strong structure when analysing a source.

The number one, most important thing is to start with a JUDGEMENT. To what extent is the source useful? That is the question after all! However, a big thing that people get caught up in is the to what extent part. See that is a super key part of the question - it is not asking you if the source is useful or not, therefore "Source A is useful" or "Source is not useful" just doesn't cut it. NESA will never give you a useless source, however they can give you a source that is less useful than others, so buzzwords like highly, limited, partially are super super super important!

But how do you make that judgement? Well you need to consider three things - content, perspective, and reliability. I underlined the last two because they are the most important + you should be underlining them in your responses :)

Content: How useful is the content? Does it provide a detailed explanation of the events/issues in question? Does it cover a wide area of information or does it only cover a small aspect of it? These will all impact the usefulness of the source :) You want to write about maybe 1-2 sentences on this - any more than that and you are probably drifting too far away from the Source.

Perspective: VERY VERY VERY important that you discuss this, and discuss this explicitly as it is part of the question. That is why I suggest underlining the word perspective, so as to make sure that the marker doesn't miss that you have covered it. Perspective covers these sorts of questions; Who produced the source? Was it an individual or a group? How are they related to the events? Did they take part or are they writing about it years later (or both in the case of a memoir!)? Why did they produce the source? Do they have any particular reason to discuss the events in a particular way - ideology, political agenda, personal agenda/prejudice? Is their perspective unique/specific - female, solider, king etc. The answer to the these questions will have a particular impact on the usefulness of the source as well, HOWEVER remember that just because a source may appear "biased" (hate that word - better to use terms like underlying ideology, political agenda or personal prejudice/agenda), doesn't mean that it isn't useful. E.g. A propaganda poster is very clearly a biased source, however it is still super useful to a historian - and that leads us onto reliability. (also you probably want to spend about 2-3 sentences on this!)

Reliability: This is where the bulk of your analysis should be! And like perspective, you should underline reliability within your responses, because it is part of the question, and you want to make sure that the marker doesn't think that you have skipped over it. Like when assessing overall usefulness, you need to make an overall judgement as to whether the source is reliable or not, using buzzwords. When analysing the source's reliability, we want to conduct 3 reliability tests. The first two can we whatever you want, e.g.; Was the source produced in close proximity to the events in question? Was it produced by someone who was involved? Was it produced to be published? Is it an extract (therefore incomplete)? In the case of a photograph, was it taken with a wide angle or narrow angle, or was it obviously staged? If it is a secondary source (ie a historians text) is it the product of extensive research and a peer reviewal process? etc. etc. The third reliability test that you will want to do is a cross-reference of content. This is where you use your own knowledge of the content or other sources in your repertoire to back up the content of the source - for e.g. do the facts that the historian presents in the source corroborate with the facts that you have learnt? or can we assert that the propaganda poster encouraging men to enlist in the british army was effective in achieving its aims due to enlistment statistics from the time? For the most part, the 10 marker requires a lot less integration of your own knowledge throughout the response, so it is a good idea to pack as much as you can into this cross reference of content, to make sure that the markers are given no opportunity to question the depth of your understanding - try and get stats and detail outside of the textbook, that one one else will be using :) Again like before, remember that sources that may appear "biased" aren't always unreliable, because we can break up reliability into two things - factual reliability and reliability as evidence. So just because a source may be factually unreliable - eg. a propaganda poster - it can still be a reliable piece of evidence for attitudes at the time, aims of the producer etc. etc.

Once you have covered everything above - it is time to round of and conclude your work with that source. Restate your judgement upon the usefulness of the source (and maybe, if you have time you can suggest other sources that will work well to expand the historians knowledge). Then hey presto! You're finished with source A, and now you just need to repeat the process above for source B :) (Never intergrate them, deal with the two sources separately - this isn't english  ;) )

Obviously when it comes to the shorter answer responses you will not need to be going as in depth, this is the structure of a 10 marker. When it comes to the shorter ones, depending on the length just make sure that you are integrating content from the source, and relating your own knowledge back to it.

Hope this helps! Let me know if you're confused with anything :)

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« Reply #253 on: April 29, 2017, 01:48:15 pm »
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hey guys!
Yesterday I received the notification for this terms task on the personality study (I'm doing Germany and it's Albert Speer). We're actually not doing any content / learning in class so it's basically an independent research task thats based on analysing historians and the personalities impact on history. I was wondering if anyone had any tips on how to approach this best or tips that helped when studying a personality. Much appreciated!

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« Reply #254 on: April 29, 2017, 01:54:17 pm »
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hey guys!
Yesterday I received the notification for this terms task on the personality study (I'm doing Germany and it's Albert Speer). We're actually not doing any content / learning in class so it's basically an independent research task thats based on analysing historians and the personalities impact on history. I was wondering if anyone had any tips on how to approach this best or tips that helped when studying a personality. Much appreciated!

Hey! Check out an article I wrote HERE, which conveniently has examples based on Albert Speer :)
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