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September 24, 2021, 09:27:42 am

Author Topic: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!  (Read 536 times)

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juicebox_441

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QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
« on: July 27, 2021, 08:39:50 pm »
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Hi all,

I need someone to please have a read over my short story and give me honest feedback. Can you please let me know if the story flows and makes sense? Also, do the sentences make sense and are grammatically accurate?
We're supposed to construct a slice-of-life story that is based off a culture of our choice, and we're supposed to add a flashback in the middle of the story and then finish off the story mysteriously or with a twist that is up to the reader to interpret.

My story is based off a Middle Eastern/Muslim vibes culture, and revolves around a doctor who decides to leave her birth place (Iraq) and move to Australia just to get better payment.

Thanks heaps!!

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Re: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2021, 10:51:34 am »
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When is this due? I have my exam tomorrow, might as well just wing it lol

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Re: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2021, 10:55:23 am »
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When is this due? I have my exam tomorrow, might as well just wing it lol
My exam's this friday...still haven't got enough feedback lol !!