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Economics Case Study Assessment
« on: April 24, 2020, 05:44:36 pm »
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Hi All, I hope we are safe in these corona times! I was wondering if someone could provide feedback on my economic case study assessment task. I chose the US :) I would really appreciate it !! Stay safe :)

« Last Edit: April 24, 2020, 05:46:24 pm by UzaSaa »
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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2020, 07:12:26 pm »
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Hi UzaSaa,

I've just done a quick see through of your document.

Thought I'd just tell you that on the title page you've written 'Economics' as 'Ecomomics'.

This is the only error I've found so far.

I'll tell another one of my AN collaborators to help you out. She's really good at providing feedback.

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« Last Edit: April 25, 2020, 01:33:43 pm by JerryMouse2019 »
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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2020, 06:20:10 am »
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Hi UsaSaa!

I'm the AN Collaborator that Jerry was referring to :)

And I would be more than happy to proofread, edit and add comments/suggestions to your Economics assignment. However, as I go through your assignment, I would just need to know the word limit for your assignment, your task criteria so I can annotate and mark your assignment and when your assignment is due. So, can you send me these details ASAP, please?

Either way, I'm extremely excited to look through your assignment :)

Kind Regards,

Darcy Dillon.
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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2020, 08:09:31 am »
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Yep this is the assessment task. Word limit is 1320 max (10 percent over 1200) so I know I’m over, will reduce over time.

Due on the 29th of April.

There is two parts (part a and b) but I think I’m fine for part a, just wanted someone to check my part b!! Thanks
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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2020, 08:33:57 am »
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Hi UzaSaa,

Thank you so much for the information! It's really going to help me proofread, edit and annotate your assignment but I would be more than happy to look at both parts of your assignment if you want :)

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Darcy Dillon.
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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2020, 09:02:16 am »
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might as well show part a it wouldn't hurt.

there is no word limit for part a
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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #6 on: April 27, 2020, 09:59:20 am »
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Hi UzaSaa,

I'm extremely sorry for the late reply but I have looked over the Part A of your assignment and it's actually pretty good! I only made a few suggestions for you to edit and refine. I'm looking over your Part B and it also looks extremely good so far but I am just making some suggestions for you to cut, edit and refine. This will probably take me about an hour to do so I'll get this part back as soon as possible.

Sincere apologies,

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Re: Economics Case Study Assessment
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2020, 12:27:01 pm »
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Hi UzaSaa,

I'm extremely sorry for the late reply but I have looked over the Part A of your assignment and it's actually pretty good! I only made a few suggestions for you to edit and refine. I'm looking over your Part B and it also looks extremely good so far but I am just making some suggestions for you to cut, edit and refine. This will probably take me about an hour to do so I'll get this part back as soon as possible.

Sincere apologies,

Darcy Dillon.

Hi Darcy, I was wondering if you'd finished the feedback for my assessment. of course there is no obligation for you to do so, but if you can just let me know if you can get it to me within the next 2-3 hours or not, cause I wanted to submit the task.

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