Eh, idk if I got the contention right
In a letter to the editor regarding the recent rise of anti-vaccination supporters in Australia, Jenny Gilmartin responds vehemently, contending that those who oppose vaccination are inevitably jeopardising the health of the future generations, and that the government current allocation of budget is unsatisfactory and may be detrimental to public health in the long term.
Gilmartin’s straightforward headline encapsulates the author’s firm stance on the issue that an education strategy to dispel radical and cynical views against vaccination and to quell the anti-vaccination movement. Adopting a logical and reasoned tone, Gilmartin opens by listing various diseases of the past, compelling the readers to reflect upon the positive implications that vaccination has brought to humanity. This appeal to ethos conditions the audience to comprehend the cause and effect model of immunisations, and allowing them to clearly understand the connection between vaccination and the eradication of diseases. Substantialising her stance with an analogy of visiting an old cemetery, Gilmartin instils fear within her audience by highlighting the deaths of “multiple children […] within days” of each other due to infectious diseases. Here, Gilmartin accentuates the severity of the threat of infectious diseases whilst impelling the audience to experience gratitude for the modern society, safeguarded by vaccinations. In this historical comparison, author reinforces the “success of immunisation programs" and positions the audience to share her point of view that vaccination are a vital aspect of humanity that must not be undermined at any costs.
Switching to a passionate tone, Gilmartin proceeds to underscore the “horrendous effects” infectious diseases has upon children. Connotations of the words “blind”, “deaf”, “crippled” and “vegetative” illustrate to the audience the horrifying consequences of measles, presenting to them a hypothetical future outcome should the immunisation program be jeopardised. Gilmartin’s repetition of “children” appeals to the readers’ family values, inviting them to respond empathically and galvanises them to side with Gilmartin’s contention that the health of our future generations may be at stake. The accompanying visual also exemplifies Gilmartin’s stance in that vaccination is monumentally significant to the future generations. Presenting the audience with “vaccination” or “negligence”, the author implies the obvious choice in a near ironical sense, simultaneously ridiculing the anti-vaccination supporters. Similarly, Gilmartin expresses her discontent with the funding designated to the current health education strategy, suggesting that with the millions of dollars that could be contributing towards this worthy cause is instead ineffectively used in what “Minister Scott Morrison believes […] will save the government”. The use of the word “believe” hints at the minister’s degree of uncertainty in his decisions and prompts the audience to accept that the funding ought to be used for health education.
By implying that more attention should be given to the health education strategy in terms of dismiss sceptical beliefs against the vaccination program, Gilmartin seeks to encourage the audience to come to realisation of the revolutionary benefits of vaccination on public health, and the exigency for better government funding in order to continue the success of immunisation.