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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #30 on: June 23, 2016, 06:45:42 pm »
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nothing.

From the van, all Jones could see was a vast expanse of open nothingness - no land, no sea, no sky.  Simply nothing.  He began to wonder if he was truly real.

A staggering blow to the back of his head reassured him of his reality.  'Get out, scum!' screamed his captor.

Jones felt a ball of cold anger explode in his stomach.  With a sudden sense of invincibility, born of his long experience with the Navy Seals, Quetzacotl tribes, and most terrifying of all, two-headed Tasmanians (statist isn't as unacceptable as racist, yeah?) he turned to face his opponent with a deadly calm.

'Do you know what I think?' he uttered scornfully.  'I think...'


"I think you should fuc.."  "Rat-tat-tat-tat-tat-tat-tat!", bullets whizzed above Jones head, convincing him that his delusional fantasy of fighting of his captors is mere stupidity.

Taking advantage of the captor's "new-found respect", the captor taunted: "Where do you think your wife and kids are huh?" "They simply don't exist!" he added scornfully.

Before Jones could respond,the driver exitted the vechicle and faced towads Mr Jones, he asked politely: "Captain, agent Jones, do you remember me? I'm Nojima, your partner during the resistance movement remember?"

Jones responded Nojima with a blank and confused stare.

"It is ******* useless, he has already been brainwashed multiple times by the "Indoctrinate". Remarked the man angrily, "Let's give up and shoot him already, he is the property of the "Indoctrinate", I don't want them to know that we exist and..."

Nojima interrupted: "Sir, let's give him another chance, let him rest for the night, I've already ordered Private Ryan to set up the tents, then we shoot him in the morning."

"In the head." The man added.

Jones finally found the courage to talk "Liars! There is no such thing as the "Indoctrinate" and there is no such thing as the "resistance movement", I have lived a happy life under utopia with our current government, if the "Indoctrinate" existed, woulnt it create a dystopian society, and thus everyone be aware of that?"

"Oh, you see.." The man said, "How many of your memories are unhappy memories?"

Jones replied: "I dont have any unhappy memories, because the "Indoctrinate" doesnt exist at all!"

 "When was our current government elected, Jones?" The man asked.

"About 20 years ago,why?" Jones Replied.

"Try to remember Jones" The man added impatiently.

Jones reflected his childhood, teen years, adulthood, marriage, his employment and up till his kidnapping. He immediately realised that his adulthood was much more happier than his childhood. Scanning through his memories, he remembers being abused by his grandfather in his barn, then dropped out of school , neglected and ditched by his parents at the age of 8. Jones scans further into the future, the new government has just been elected, anti-cancer vaccines were being deployed, global peace treaties were being signed, his grandfather suddenly disappears and parents after some 16 years reappear again.

"Something is just wrong" Jones remarked.

"Did you remember the day you took the anti-cancer vaccine?" The man asked, now in a more sincere tone.

"The vaccines were designed so that the doctors were able to...






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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #31 on: June 24, 2016, 09:22:04 pm »
"...take more days off due to reduced cancer incidence in the population."

Taken aback with shock, Jones felt the sudden anger well up once more.

"So you mean... you mean... vaccines... that's what the government has created them for?!  To reduce incidence of diseases?  Like... wtf?  So those damn lazy doctors can get time off?  I guess the government needs to keep them happy, though, hah.  Voters, influential in society, yeah, I see.  Outrageous!  I'm just not going to stick out this ridiculously unjust corruption.  Down with the vaccines!"

The man gave a cynically jaded chuckle.

"You guessed it, mate.  Yeah.  That's how messed up our society has become."
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #32 on: June 24, 2016, 09:39:14 pm »


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"So you mean... you mean... vaccines... that's what the government has created them for?!  To reduce incidence of diseases?  Like... wtf?  So those damn lazy doctors can get time off?
(uh heidii, your logical reasoning baffles me  :))
"This is what happens when democracy is run by idiots!" The man added.


(Come on guys, it shouldnt be just me and Heidii writting the entire story)
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #33 on: June 24, 2016, 10:28:55 pm »
(Come on guys, it shouldnt be just me and Heidii writting the entire story)

(Trust me, I would add, but the storyline has just gotten so complex, I'm lost)
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #34 on: June 24, 2016, 10:50:31 pm »
off-topic
(Trust me, I would add, but the storyline has just gotten so complex, I'm lost)
wait, there's a storyline?!  news to me

nah lol, join in anyways, you just have to read the one before, don't have to have a clue what's goin' on :P

(uh heidii, your logical reasoning baffles me  :))
duhhhh, that's the aim ;)
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #35 on: September 05, 2016, 08:01:33 pm »
A gun materialised from thin air and rested snugly into the stranger's hand.
Tasmania??? breathed in deeply, realising the situation he/she??? was in.

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #36 on: September 05, 2016, 08:02:00 pm »
Question: is Tasmania a boy or a girl?

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #37 on: September 05, 2016, 08:12:20 pm »
Lets call them Bob because we know Bob is a male. Btw, this must have been a great thread (lol its from June though and now it's September)

A gun materialised from thin air and rested snugly into the stranger's hand.
Bob breathed in deeply, realising the situation he was in.

He had the power to change everything with a single squeeze of the trigger. What he did next would surprise everyone, even those closest to him..

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #38 on: September 05, 2016, 08:13:14 pm »
A gun materialised from thin air and rested snugly into the stranger's hand.
Tasmania??? breathed in deeply, realising the situation he/she??? was in.
It was Tasmania Jones! He had been walking through an ice-covered region of Greenland when he found a large ice cylinder that was made a thousand years ago by the Vikings. The cylinder had a height of h metres and a diameter of d metres. Tasmania Jones found that the volume of the cylinder was 216 m3. At that time, 1 January 2010, the cylinder had not changed in a thousand years. It was exactly as it was when the Vikings made it.

Moderator Comment: HighTide, please refrain from using mathematics related posts on the "fun" forum.
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #39 on: September 05, 2016, 08:20:58 pm »
But then, alas! Tasmania Jones never returned for another instalment in 2015, however, the tribe of 2016 methods students await his return of his adventures, along with the first exams of the new study design, where HighTide will never have to use maths again.
« Last Edit: September 05, 2016, 08:40:19 pm by insanipi »
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