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Title: English: protest speech
Post by: maily1234 on February 23, 2021, 05:30:21 pm

Hi, I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my English assignment? The task is to write a protest speech about a contentious issue that demands immediate action. I decided to write about how the cruel and inhumane treatment that asylum seekers are being subjected to, which also contravenes their human rights. And how the government is misrepresenting asylum seekers and covering up what is actually happening inside Manus and Naura island detention centres. English is the hardest subject for me and any help would be really appreciated. Thank you so much.