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Title: English Online Essay
Post by: grace.mc10 on April 16, 2020, 05:19:03 pm

Hi,

This is my English assignment for IA1. I have to write an online literary essay about a key concept that is both in the play Cosi and the film Little Miss Sunshine. I am focusing on the concept of normality versus abnormality. We are writing for "The Guardian", where an upcoming series of essays will celebrate Cosi - so that's why I have focused on Cosi but supported and shown differences with Little Miss Sunshine as well.

Thanks so much in advance!

Grace

Title: Re: English Online Essay
Post by: s110820 on April 18, 2020, 07:26:36 am

Hi Grace,

I would be more than happy to look over it for you :)

Title: Re: English Online Essay
Post by: s110820 on April 20, 2020, 08:08:43 am

Hi Grace,

I'm sorry it took so long but I have finished adding comments and suggestions to your essay. Please don't hesitate to contact me via private messages on the ATAR Notes website or through my email: [email protected] if you have any questions, queries or concerns about the feedback.

Thank you,

Darcy Dillon.

Title: Re: English Online Essay
Post by: grace.mc10 on April 21, 2020, 08:35:02 am

Hi Darcy,

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. The help was greatly appreciated!

Title: Re: English Online Essay
Post by: s110820 on April 21, 2020, 09:09:41 am

No problem.

I was more than happy to help :)