Does the treatment of personal morality (actions and choices based on morality) in Julius Caesar
and The Prince reveal similarities or reinforce the texts’ distinctive qualities?The treatment of personal morality is arguably the main contributing factor in rising or succumbing
to power.
Awesome! Machiavelli’s The Prince, a non-fiction political treatise written in prose form and
Shakespeare’s play, Julius Caesar, written in the final years of Elizabeth’s reign both communicate
the unstable nature of the political world where in order to sustain power, personal morality must be
obliterated.
This sentence reads awkwardly because you've got a bunch of clauses and phrases that are a bit disjointed. I would write this as:
"Machiavelli's non-fiction political treatise written in prose, The Prince, and Shakespeare's historical tragedy composed in the final years of Queen Elizabeth's reign, Julis Caesar, both observe the unstable nature of the political world. Both texts explore the notion that in order to sustain power, personal morality must be obliterated." This reverses the placement of the text in relation to its description, but also cuts it into two sentences so that it is more easily digestable. In the 16th century, a leader must possess the ability to be interchangeable when the occasion demands it, using manipulation as a mechanism to gain support. Both texts deal with the overarching question of whether a leader should accept the means justifying the end.
I think this should be, "the ends justifying the means" otherwise this reads as though you are saying that although the ending may be bad, the way it all happened was moral. Which The Prince suggests the opposite of, from my understanding? Separate in
time and place, both composers value a nation of stability, arising issues of leadership and
succession, demonstrating both similarities and distinctive qualities regarding the implication of
personal morality in political decisions.
You've done an excellent job of directly answering the question over and over. It is so rare that students truly do this because they get excited about the texts and their knowledge of that, and forget to tailor it to the question.Personal morality in politics only leads to self-destruction
To me, you are talking about the literal death of the person by saying self-destruction. Is this what you intend, or do you mean them and their empire/intentions/government can also be destructed? It is a small word choice thing but I want you to be aware , therefore there should be a distinction
between how a leader wants to act and how he should act. Machiavelli suggests that for a leader
to gain and maintain power he has to make decisions that negate his morality as to avoid moving
“towards self-destruction rather than self-preservation.” This contradiction reflects Machiavelli’s
contention in that he is emphasising why Florence is crumbling. Shakespeare presents the
character of Brutus as one who deviates from what Machiavelli, as he is portrayed as honorable,
yet naive, about the political treachery surrounding him. In his soliloquy, he is convincing himself
that Caesar’s death is necessary because “he would be crowned. How that might change his
nature.” Shakespeare uses Brutus’s implausible reasoning, with his wavering ethics as the
catalysts to which Brutus embarks on a road to self destruction. Machiavelli insists that there can
be no moral considerations when it comes to politics as “anyone who declines to behave as people
do, in order to behave as they should, is schooling himself for catastrophe.” Machiavelli’s political
realism in the early turmoil of 16th century Europe, shed light on the corrupt nature of humans and
their desires for power. Conjunctively, Shakespeare successfully demonstrated that a nation in
such state holds no room for honourable men as Cassius exploits Brutus’s honour as a weakness
for “who so firm that cannot be seduced?”. This rhetorical questions reiterates Cassius’s
machiavellian intent which will gradually dismantle Brutus’s character as Shakespeare emphasises
the state of political turmoil in Rome as a power struggled emerged due to England being without
an heir. Power demands the negation of morality in order for a leader not to succumb to self
destruction.
Again, this has really dealt with the words of the question beautifully. Your integrated is great, and you've also followed through with the self-destruction part of this paragraph really well, it is very unique.A leader must seperate their ethics from their actions, resulting in a persona that possess the
ability to be interchangeable when the occasion demands it.
I'm just so ridiculously impressed by this. You've really embodied everything that The Prince suggests, but is also evident in Shakespeare's texts, and you've let it give your paragraph direction. Although, I'm wondering, if you could add "personal morality" or a variation to the sentence? Potentially swap "ethics" for "personal morals?" I know it doesn't have the same meaning on a technical level, but it is something to consider so that you can show the marker that you are really dealing with the question in every spot. The prince has been regarded as the
‘work of the Devil’
Where is this quote from? Is it from the text or is this from an outside source? If it is from an outside source it needs to be referenced. Otherwise, carry on as Machiavelli exposes the idea that in order to sustain power one must “be a
fox in order to recognise traps, and a lion to frighten off wolves.”
You could identify a technique here to strengthen this. Where there is a description involving an animal, there is a technique This will strengthen your analysis. Caesar recognised the danger of Cassius, and arguably, if he had been a ‘lion’ as Machiavelli suggests, he would have been able to
cease Cassius’s intent before they spiralled. Cassius represents the Roman republic which was
fighting against the threat of the tyranny of monarchial rulers - with comparison to the Prince, it
could be concluded that Caesar was not of ‘machiavellian nature’ nor a tyrant. Machiavelli
conflicted with the Catholic Church’s ethical teachings in that as long as “a leader does what it
takes to win power and keep it, his methods will always be reckoned honourable and widely
praised” as the people are only concerned with the end result.
For a long time now, there has been no deep textual analysis, only talking about the text on a macro level. You can do this, but you need to them zoom in on a specific example from the text to give it strength.The obliteration of ethics when the
occasion demands it fits Antony’s portrayal throughout Julius Caesar
is ?? as?? maybe? The sentence doesn't quite make sense. one of admiration in his
ease of making rational political decisions. The composition of a proscription list immediately after
his persuasion of the people, Machiavelli would approve of, as a measure to ensure their smooth
advance into power and ensuring their position by removing any opponents. Antony in this, is
presented an astute leader as to win power he agrees that “[his sisters son] shall not live”. One
must be able to adapt when it is necessary.
A leader who is able to use manipulation as a mechanism to hid their true intent will achieve results
. Manipulation requires going against what the
right thing (This is subjective. Try, ethical or moral. would be in order to benefit oneself and
Machiavelli says that a leader has to “know to to disguise [their] slyness, how to pretend one thing
and cover up another”. Shakespeare successfully portrays this through Cassius who manipulates
Brutus’s to partake in the conspiracy as a figure-head that will cover his evil intents with that of
honourable reasoning and change “what would appear offence in us..will change to virtue and to
worthiness”. Through Cassius’s sinister approach Shakespeare is demonstrating the profusion of
ambition which drives elite men to strive for power at any cost. Machiavelli would agree with this
because a leader doesn't have to be “compassionate, loyal, humane, honest and religious,” as
long as he “seem to possess them.” This ostentatious list is in regard to the shifting allegiances
and betrayal surrounding the roman empire and Machiavelli suggests that to maintain power
amongst the fickle, a facade is essential as a mechanism of manipulation. In accord to this,
Shakespeare uses Antony as an epitome the Elizabethan ideal of being patriotic and able to make
effective political decisions. Antony’s calculated revelation of Caesar’s generosity finally drives the
crowd into a destructive frenzy. They leave, intent on revenge, and Antony’s calculated intention
becomes clear as he addresses the empty stage: “Now let it work. Mischief, thou art afoot, Take
thou what course thou wilt!,” addressing the power of rhetoric and the successive portrayal of
virtue. Manipulation is necessary to advances ones position.
In order to sustain power, a leader must accept that the end justifies the means.
(Yeah, this is how the quote is supposed to be hehe) Due to human
nature, arguabl
ey, it is acceptable to take measures to control ambition to prevent tyranny.
Machiavelli emphasises that it’s important to “foresee and forestall future problems” and uses the
analogy of tuberculosis to relate to conspiracy in that “as time goes by it gets easy to diagnose and
hard to cure.” This is successfully demonstrated when Caesar recognises that “Cassius has a lean
and hungry look…such men are dangerous” but doesn’t do anything about it. Arguably, if he had
made the decisions necessary to ensure his safety, his rein would not have been challenged. In
order to maintain power Machiavelli says that a complete disregard for moral standards is required
which segregated his work from all that had gone before it as “the end is all that counts”.
Shakespeare uses Brutus as the main point of contention with the ‘Machiavellian’ idealism and the
use of personal morality. During a period of war, when one should supposedly nullify morality,
Brutus asks cassius, “did not great Julius bleed for justice’ sake?”. Shakespeare uses this rhetoric
question to connect with his audience and propose the spiralling threat of a non-ethical world.
Whilst Brutus questions morality in theMachiavellian view that the end justifies the means, it is
clear that a leader will have to go against his moral if he is to succeed in the political world.
The use of personal morality
supply’s supplies one with the ability to both achieve and fail. Machiavelli’s
political treatise, The Prince
, and Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar, despite
being seperate in time and place,
clearly enhance the portrayal of moral standards in regards to how a leader should act and the
threats necessary to gain and maintain power. Acting as a ‘how to’
instructional, directional, directing...these sound better to me than "how to"guide and demonstrative
handbook, both composers successfully demonstrate the role of people in a nations stability.