Feedback for Yeats plz :)

[impulsebro89]

Hi!
I was wondering if anyone could have a look at my Yeats essay and give me feedback plz? Be as brutally honest as you can. Thanks

[holky]

Hey, I've added some feedback to a google doc version of your file - my comments are in purple
Here's the link!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WnfEmAWXGR-AwUKvkKNsCm1RzaOgABuio_lbE0rf7zw/edit?usp=sharing
I hope my feedback's helpful!

[impulsebro89]

Thank you so much for your feedback!! Appreciate it (sorry for the late reply!)

I see you're doing the HSC this year too - Good luck for your upcoming exams 

[impulsebro89]

Also in regards to your feedback:

The reason why I don't really 'answer' the question at the end of my paragraphs is because my teacher always told me I tend to become too repetitive if I answer the q. at the end of every para, so that's why I really didn't do that. Do you think it'll be better if I did? (to maximise those marks!)

 

[holky]

Thank you so much for your feedback!! Appreciate it (sorry for the late reply!)

I see you're doing the HSC this year too - Good luck for your upcoming exams 

Hey no problem! Good luck to you as well! Here's to never having to read Yeats ever again after Friday!

Also in regards to your feedback:

The reason why I don't really 'answer' the question at the end of my paragraphs is because my teacher always told me I tend to become too repetitive if I answer the q. at the end of every para, so that's why I really didn't do that. Do you think it'll be better if I did? (to maximise those marks!)

It is definitely better to link at the end of each paragraph, even if it's repetitive. Remember this is timed exam conditions, so markers will be a bit lenient - a 20/20 doesn't neccesarily mean a perfect essay, just an outstanding essay, particularly given the situation.

[impulsebro89]

Here's to never having to do English ever again!