Hi there, I have attached some comments on your Frankenstein essay. I think that the content so far is quite good, however, you really should stick more closely to the main ideas you've started with in your introduction. These main ideas work as signpoasts for you, not just for the person reading and assessing your work. The other factor your should watch for is the fact that the essay topic itself does not refer to the Creature (except in the quote) so you don't need your whole essay to be focused on examples about him. Elizabeth also experiences "unfulfilled human need" when Justine is sentenced. Other minor characters also suffer harm from this (eg Justine's unloving family, Caroline's poverty as a young woman). You could even refer to the performance of the court seeking to remove harm by convicting Justine of William's murder in order to keep society safe from such violence.