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Let's write a story together
« on: January 28, 2013, 07:17:28 pm »
Very easy game. All you have to do is look at the comment above and make the story flow. Everything is allowed except insulting genre, nationality etc

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It was a very cold night. Jones spent his whole day at his office, working on an important project. He finally made his way home and missed his wife and kids
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2013, 08:51:05 pm »
who had left him years before. Almost lost in his pensive thoughts, he pushed open the front door, not noticing that it had uncharacteristically been left ajar. Tiredly, he walked to the door of his study, and placed his briefcase in the threshold. Jones reached for the light-switch, but found it unresponsive. Through the gloom and the shadows that danced on the walls, he saw the silhouette of a man, seated in his desk chair.
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2013, 08:55:33 pm »
"I've been expecting you." The voice came from the man.
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2013, 08:58:10 pm »
"Why, why have you been expecting me all this time?" Asked Jones.

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #4 on: January 28, 2013, 09:07:07 pm »
"That's very forward of you" laughed the silhouette, "I've come to make you an offer Mr. Jones, and it would be in your best interests to hear me out."

A group of red dots appeared on Jones' chest, swarming towards his heart.
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« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2013, 09:55:10 pm »
"I've found the traces of your family" said the silhouette . "They have been captured by a mafia and sold to one of the tribes in Africa". Jones stopped for a moment...he knew what it would be like being trapped. He, too, got trapped in his granddad's barn in Tasmania when he was 5
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2013, 05:59:14 pm »
It was a scary experience, one which left him scarred for life. This was what happened... Read on if you dare.
"A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths." - Steven Wright

"By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail." - Benjamin Franklin

"Even if you fall on your face, you're still moving forward." - Victor Kiam

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2013, 06:03:45 pm »
Way to shatter the fourth wall  ;) Now back to the story:
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2013, 07:11:39 pm »
He was too young to know any survival skills to escape his granddads barn; but now as a 42 year old he is very nimble at tying knots. The red dots on his shirts soon englufs the white only to leave red liquid dripping on the floor joining the puddle that surrounds his feet.
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2013, 09:52:16 pm »
Why do the red dots become red liquid that drips on the floor, joining the puddle that surrounds his feet? Well, I'll tell you now. It is due to the fantastically chemically advanced shirt that
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"A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths." - Steven Wright

"By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail." - Benjamin Franklin

"Even if you fall on your face, you're still moving forward." - Victor Kiam

"Do not take life too seriously. You will never get out of it alive." - Elbert Hubbard

"Any kid will run any errand for you, if you ask at bedtime." - Red Skelton

"Be kind whenever possible. It is always possible." - Dalai Lama

I love the quotes in your sig :)

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2013, 11:22:21 pm »
screams "AWWW HELLLL NO MUTHAFUCKA" when you drop a piece of chocolate from a choc-top on it at the movies. He looked down at the puddle that was slowly spreading in a way he couldn't predict. He looked up at the silhouetted man and tilted his head to the side. "What the fuck did you just say about me, you fucking little bitch? I'll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals and I have over 300 confirmed kills."
The silhouette wiggled with rage.
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2013, 11:26:11 pm »
My mates call me Tasmania jones..I've escaped from so deadly scenes...You think you know me? continued Tasmania jones
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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #12 on: February 11, 2013, 09:00:39 pm »
"Oh yes I do, I even know every single one of your most intimate secrets." replied the silhouette, sneering.

Tasmania's bravado vanished in a blink of the eye.

"Whhhooo ... aaaaare ... yooouuuu?" he stuttered nervously, fiddling with the bottom of his shirt, his hands exuding litres of cold sweat.

The shadow threw back its head and laughed unnervingly. "You may not want to know, but I will tell you. I am
"A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths." - Steven Wright

"By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail." - Benjamin Franklin

"Even if you fall on your face, you're still moving forward." - Victor Kiam

"Do not take life too seriously. You will never get out of it alive." - Elbert Hubbard

"Any kid will run any errand for you, if you ask at bedtime." - Red Skelton

"Be kind whenever possible. It is always possible." - Dalai Lama

I love the quotes in your sig :)

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Re: Let's write a story together
« Reply #13 on: February 11, 2013, 09:03:12 pm »
The Eggman. I am the Walrus. One might even say that I am the Goo Goo G'joob. And I have a job for you.
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« Reply #14 on: February 11, 2013, 09:11:36 pm »
"Whaaaat job?" he stammered, his hands wetting the hem of his shirt.

"A dangerous and terrifying one, but one you must undertake if you are ever to see your family again."

"Anything, anything, I'll do anything for my dear wife and baby son." he whispered.
"A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths." - Steven Wright

"By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail." - Benjamin Franklin

"Even if you fall on your face, you're still moving forward." - Victor Kiam

"Do not take life too seriously. You will never get out of it alive." - Elbert Hubbard

"Any kid will run any errand for you, if you ask at bedtime." - Red Skelton

"Be kind whenever possible. It is always possible." - Dalai Lama

I love the quotes in your sig :)