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Hi, I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)
« on: April 02, 2020, 04:34:33 pm »
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Hi, I was wondering If someone could give me feedback on my essay on Henry Lawson's short stories. Yes I do the HSC curriculum, and I have posted this on the HSC forums, but the forums seem really dead there for some reason. So I decided to post it here.

Any help will be greatly appreciated, Thank you so much!!! :)
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Re: Hi, I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2020, 05:08:43 pm »
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Hi,

I'll annotate and make edits on your essay for you :)
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Re: Hi, I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2020, 05:12:42 pm »
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Quote from: s110820 on April 02, 2020, 05:08:43 pm
Hi,

I'll annotate and make edits on your essay for you :)
Thank you so much!!!! :)
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Re: Hi, I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)
« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2020, 09:32:24 am »
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Hi!

I just finished annotating your essay -- I gave you a few helpful hints and comments throughout your analysis. I hope it helps you improve your essay but if you do have any questions, please don't hesitate to send me a message.

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Re: Hi, I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)
« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2020, 11:07:26 am »
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Quote from: s110820 on April 03, 2020, 09:32:24 am
Hi!

I just finished annotating your essay -- I gave you a few helpful hints and comments throughout your analysis. I hope it helps you improve your essay but if you do have any questions, please don't hesitate to send me a message.
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I really appreciate the help :)


Quote from: s110820 on April 03, 2020, 09:32:24 am
Hi!

I just finished annotating your essay -- I gave you a few helpful hints and comments throughout your analysis. I hope it helps you improve your essay but if you do have any questions, please don't hesitate to send me a message.
I went over your feedback and implemented it in my essay. The feedback was super super helpful!!!! Thank you so much for taking the time to give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)


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Re: Hi, I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my essay. Thank you :)
« Reply #5 on: April 03, 2020, 05:29:59 pm »
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No problem! I was more than happy to help :)
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