Text Synthesis

[nancynguyen_]

Hi,

I am doing Sci-fi and in my feedback, I am constantly told that my synthesis is weak.

I have tried to hard to improve this aspect but my teacher's explanation is always so vague.

Can someone please help me?

Thank you

[holky]

Hey, if you send some of your writing over to me, I can have a read and see if I can give you some more explicit feedback.