Hi! I graduated from a private school with an ATAR of 99.70 (University of Melbourne student, Dean's honours list), and a score of 46 in VCE English. My Section B texts were The Crucible and Year of Wonders and I am also selling notes for Language Analysis. Additionally, have notes and essays from Section A to demonstrate the high essay level required to score well in Text Response.
These resources were instrumental to helping me achieve my score, and I want them to supplement your learning and help you achieve the scores you deserve. They are extremely comprehensive and are literally the product of months of hard work and perfecting, with a fair few hours spent crying in front of the computer, trying to word an intricate idea in a novel way, and searching for the most precise and sophisticated comparison - which I definitely have in these final notes. All the essays I am selling were given 10/10 by my tutors Carolyn Stone and Chris O’Callaghan, BOTH REPUTABLE VCE English examiners - so the essays are the best of the best! In English, I received the excellence award at my school and 198/200 in SACs. My SAC essays were very similar to my practice essays, and most of them were worse than the quality of my practice essays yet managed to get me full marks from a school that got 6 50s in English, which gives you an idea of the standard. These examiners also stated that my notes (including key paragraphs, sentence starters from a stack of readings and resources, character profiles, word bank, quote bank, essay plans) were the most detailed and sophisticated they had ever seen, and were enough to give even the worst English student a 50, provided they put the work in. Buying these notes/essays/books would save you the HUGE amount of time I spent writing them needed to strengthen your understanding of the texts, and would essentially give you the key to a perfect 50.
The price for everything is just $100 with over hundreds of hours of hard work's value and thousands of dollars of professional tutoring's value to formulate and refine these notes. HOWEVER, I have a bulk package offer for $100 for anything/everything you'd like in ALL of the 7 subjects I am selling notes from (English (46), French (45), German (46), Methods, Specialist and Chemistry) (I am selling a plethora of oral scripts, sample essays, books, study guides, notes & past/practice SACs and tests for all my VCE subjects and UMAT/MMI), not just 1 subject, which would save you thousands of dollars and is much better value than just getting a few products (picking a few items would cost you over $100). I can send you everything in all of my subjects listed on all the ads in my profile easily, and rest assured these are very detailed notes - I recently heard back from a student who bought them last year and attained 99.95. Over a hundred happy buyers and counting, with many students with my notes having achieved ATARs in the high 99s up to 99.95. Please let me know if you are interested.
Description of all individual Section B comparative resources:
1. 12 key essay paragraphs and list of key comparisons, intro/conc you can memorise - this was my lifeline and my secret weapon.
I wrote/refined a paragraph for each main theme likely to arise in the SAC/exam, as you end up reusing a LOT of the same paras. I memorise these paragraphs then in exams, used my memorised material and tweaked bits of it to fit the specificities and key words of the topic. These are gold whether you want to memorise them, or read over to get an idea of 10/10 50 study score standard, as everything important about the text is written up like an essay with incisive argument and rich vocab.
2. MY 58/60 SAC $20 & 3 essays marked 10/10 (all typed, marked 10/10 by 2 examiners - view previews for a sample of the very high standard)
3. Sentence starters 60 pages 24,000 words - not even an exagerration; this is an extremely comprehensive resource. It is essentially the complex and sophisticated phrases/analysis sentences from 50 students' essays/Harvard lectures/uni papers, that make your essays 10/10)
4. 40 detailed essay plans with overview of each paragraph/themes/examples planned for each essay topic
5. Quote bank 24 pages
6. Word bank - excellent vocabulary and several synonyms for theme-specific vocabulary, which is immensely beneficial for speed in essays
7. Plot summary - personally made, great to memorise so you can easily pick out examples to use
Though YOW is being replaced by The Dressmaker, I still highly recommend my notes as the paragraphs for The Crucible are already perfectly worded and the themes are still very similar.
Description of all individual Section C Language Analysis resources:
1. MY 40/40 LANGUAGE ANALYSIS SAC & all my 17 lang analysis essays marked 10/10 by 2 examiners - just $100 (all are typed and not handwritten, making them easier to read - see previews for a sample of the very high standard)
2. Miscellaneous notes on Language Analysis techniques to writing a 10/10 essay - hundreds of pages, including exhaustive table of techniques and appeals --> unique, specific and sophisticated phrases to describe effect, more sentence starters, 'the sparkle effect' (phrases and techniques that make your essay stand out as 10/10), exam revision and structure/strategy notes - just $50
3. Language analysis phrase bank 25 pages (full of hundreds of phrases which I had up my sleeve, speeding up and elevating the sophistication of my essay writing significantly) - just $30
4. Script for persuasive oral and statement of explanation, which received 40/40 (also rehearsed with English examiner who said he would give it full marks) - Ice use in Australia - $40
5. Persuasive oral and statement of explanation on whether the child welfare system should be overhauled, which received 40/40 - $40
Description of all individual Section A Frankenstein resources:
1. 13 key paragraphs & memorised intro/conclusion - this was my lifeline and my secret weapon. I wrote/refined a paragraph for each main theme likely to arise in the SAC/exam, as you end up reusing a LOT of the same paras. I memorise these paragraphs then in exams, used my memorised material and tweaked bits of it to fit the specificities and key words of the topic. These are gold whether you want to memorise them, or read over to get an idea of 10/10 50 study score standard, as everything important about the text is written up like an essay with incisive argument and rich vocab.
Details about each 'All About Eve' resource:
1. All About Eve zip file of detailed theme and analysis notes - includes 8 comprehensive files, including detailed analysis notes organised under core themes, essay sentence starters (the complex and sophisticated phrases/analysis sentences from 50 students' essays, Harvard lectures, uni papers, that make essays 10/10), 2 very detailed running sheets with comprehensive scene by scene notes, an annotated script with important quotes highlighted with analysis added in the comments, and a plot summary that is personally made and is great to memorise so you can easily pick out the best examples to use.
2. All About Eve zip file of detailed character analysis profiles & quotes - includes 5 comprehensive files, including scene-by-scene character analysis, character summaries and key quotes for each character, character essay sentence starters full of excellent, sophisticated analytical phrases for each character, and additional detailed character profile docs dedicated to Eve and Margo.
3. All About Eve practice analytical SAC essay marked 10/10 by my 2 tutors who are both reputable VCE English examiners.
2. MY 30/30 SAC & 2 10/10 essays (view samples for a sample of the very high standard)
3. Sentence starters 25 pages (the complex & sophisticated phrases/analysis sentences from 50 students' essays, Harvard lectures, uni papers, that make essays 10/10)
4. 70 Essay plans with overview of each paragraph/theme/examples planned for each essay topic
5. Quote bank 27 pgs
6. Word bank - excellent vocabulary and several synonyms for theme-specific vocabulary, which is immensely beneficial for speed in essays
7. Plot summary - personally made, great to memorise so you can easily pick out examples to use