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Title: English advanced- Human experience essay
Post by: _OwO_ on December 06, 2018, 09:10:16 pm
Hey I'm doing an essay on the text “All the light we cannot see”  and using the related text "District 9". I only have half of it completed so far but a check is much appreciated. Thank you!
essay question: How can texts represent common aspects of the human experience?
Title: Re: English advanced- Human experience essay
Post by: angewina_naguen on December 07, 2018, 11:21:30 pm
Hey I'm doing an essay on the text “All the light we cannot see”  and using the related text "District 9". I only have half of it completed so far but a check is much appreciated. Thank you!
essay question: How can texts represent common aspects of the human experience?

Hey, _OwO_!

I have provided some feedback on your essay in the attached document below. I hope that it's comprehensive and will assist you with your assessment  :) Let me know if you have any questions and if you would like me to have a look at the final essay once you've completed it  ;D It's on the right track  8)

Angelina  ;D