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Phytoplankton

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Chemistry (Units 1&2): Research Investigation FA3
« on: July 12, 2020, 04:03:09 pm »
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Hey,

I was wondering if you could just skim over and check my research investigation (FA3). The selected claim is: “The Great Barrier Reef is in danger due to climate change” and I specifically talk about ocean acidification. It would be great if you could just annotate the attached document or just provide a bit of feedback in general.

Thanks so much! I love this forum!
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Re: Chemistry (Units 1&2): Research Investigation FA3
« Reply #1 on: July 13, 2020, 03:13:06 pm »
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Hey!

Glad to hear you're loving the forums :D

I could see places where you're clearly thinking about scientific writing which was great to see. I've focused on areas to improve but please know that there's a lot you've done right too :)

I think you could explain some of your concepts a bit better, there's lots of resources online for OA from a beginner or no chemistry background so it might be useful to look at those for inspiration.

Best of luck & if there's anything you don't quite understand please feel free to speak up!


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Re: Chemistry (Units 1&2): Research Investigation FA3
« Reply #2 on: July 13, 2020, 03:26:26 pm »
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Hey Bri,

Thanks so much for this feedback. There were a lot of comments on it which are so useful!! Thanks again for taking your time out to do this feedback in so much detail! I will be fixing this straight away.
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