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Razeen25

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Module A: The Great Gatsby/Sonnets Essay
« on: August 31, 2018, 10:35:41 pm »
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Hii, my school has decided to pop in one last english assessment post-trials and sadly I have a Module A unseen essay question assessment on this upcoming Monday. In trials I got below an A-range for my module A essay (I haven't been told my exact mark yet), and hence I was wondering if somebody could please mark my essay since this is worth 15% for legit one essay, which means every mark counts!!

Thank you SO SO much in advance!!
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Re: Module A: The Great Gatsby/Sonnets Essay
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2018, 10:49:41 am »
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Hey, Razeen25!

How unfortunate that you have an assessment post trials  :'( I have provided some comments on your essay which you may take on board if you need some feedback and to hopefully push you up into an A. Let me know if you have any questions!  :D

Angelina  ;D
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Re: Module A: The Great Gatsby/Sonnets Essay
« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2018, 11:08:02 am »
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Quote from: angewina_naguen on September 01, 2018, 10:49:41 am
Hey, Razeen25!

How unfortunate that you have an assessment post trials  :'( I have provided some comments on your essay which you may take on board if you need some feedback and to hopefully push you up into an A. Let me know if you have any questions!  :D

Angelina  ;D

Thank you SO SO much for this! I actually can't explain how grateful I am! If only my teacher provided feedback as elaborate and helpful as yours :').
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Re: Module A: The Great Gatsby/Sonnets Essay
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2018, 04:15:54 pm »
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Quote from: Razeen25 on September 01, 2018, 11:08:02 am
Thank you SO SO much for this! I actually can't explain how grateful I am! If only my teacher provided feedback as elaborate and helpful as yours :').

No worries  ;D ;D Glad I could help! Start pestering your teachers for assistance before the HSC but if not, I'm happy to help where I can  :) Have a good evening!

Angelina  ;D
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