Login

Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

March 29, 2024, 10:17:27 am

Author Topic: Literature - Creative Multimodal Response  (Read 1491 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

s110820

  • MOTM: April 20
  • QCE Moderator
  • Forum Obsessive
  • *****
  • Posts: 304
  • you'll be everything to the right someone
  • Respect: +151
Literature - Creative Multimodal Response
« on: February 21, 2020, 11:47:48 am »
+1
Hi,
I would just like some feedback regarding my Literature assignment which is a multimodal response to a poem (the poem that I chose was Burning Sappho by Gwen Harwood) - I am in the early stages of my assignment at the moment so I have started to write the monologue before I record the multimodal. I also have not finished writing the monologue yet so this is an excerpt (I will probably post updates of my monologue when I get through it). Any tips at all would be appreciated thanks :)
QUT 2021 - Bachelor of Education (Primary).

literally lauren

  • Administrator
  • Part of the furniture
  • *****
  • Posts: 1699
  • Resident English/Lit Nerd
  • Respect: +1423
Re: Literature - Creative Multimodal Response
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2020, 05:15:50 pm »
+1
Comments in the attached word doc! This is a really intriguing opening, and you've got some really strong thematic and subject matter links to Harwood's poetry, so you're off to a great start!

If you've got more the monologue you'd like feedback for, feel free to post that below! :D

s110820

  • MOTM: April 20
  • QCE Moderator
  • Forum Obsessive
  • *****
  • Posts: 304
  • you'll be everything to the right someone
  • Respect: +151
Re: Literature - Creative Multimodal Response
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2020, 08:46:23 pm »
+1
Hi Lauren,

I do actually have a lot more of the monologue :)

QUT 2021 - Bachelor of Education (Primary).