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Title: Hey can someone provide me with some feed back on my short response :D
Post by: 24221 on November 17, 2018, 08:43:57 am

Assess the legal response on one contemporary human rights issue. (7mark)
thank you!

Title: Re: Hey can someone provide me with some feed back on my short response :D
Post by: fantasticbeasts3 on November 17, 2018, 10:42:40 am

Hi!

I don't have much to say about this as I think your response is already amazing! You've provided a ton of relevant examples which back up your argument. I've pointed out a few expression issues which kinda disrupt the flow of your writing, but other than that, there's not really much I can comment on.

Title: Re: Hey can someone provide me with some feed back on my short response :D
Post by: 24221 on November 17, 2018, 11:57:37 am

Thank you!!
but i feel like i am lacking some domestic legal response, some of my friends are telling me to put in cases, but finding case in south Sudan is quite hard to do 

Title: Re: Hey can someone provide me with some feed back on my short response :D
Post by: fantasticbeasts3 on November 17, 2018, 03:26:41 pm

Quote from: 24221 on November 17, 2018, 11:57:37 am

Thank you!!
but i feel like i am lacking some domestic legal response, some of my friends are telling me to put in cases, but finding case in south Sudan is quite hard to do 

No worries, my pleasure!

With human rights I didn’t really use domestic legislation. I don’t think you need a lot of it (if any) to get full marks :-) Don’t worry too much about what your friends say lol