Hey Jamon
Even though with my LCDMT, I still feel that I'm not making many points, at times being repetitive. Like lets say for the criminal investigation process, I talked about investigation of crime - on how the law has taken more stricter approach for community welfare but in many instances it may conflict with individual liberties. Also talked about detention and bail. When I'm making the evaluation at the end of each paragraph, i've stated the arguments that I described through my case. But straight after i did the linking sentence in which i evaluated, then moved to next paragraph.
So how should i expand on this generally before coming to the link.
the only thing is like I've got evidence but arguments doesn't seem to flow naturally. What do you suggest?
Thanks