An introduction and one very long body paragraph (oops, but I thought it would just be good to get something written and out there rather than nothing).
In advance, thanks for any advice/feedback!!!
Recently, a young Saudi Arabian girl fled her allegedly abusive family and eventually arrived in Canada after being denied asylum in Australia. Tony Roberts’ letter to the editor, titled “Rhaf Mohammed al-Qunun: Canada the land of fair go, not Australia,” harshly criticises this political response, or lack thereof, contending that Australia’s failure to provide asylum is a blatant act of hypocrisy against our national values.
Adopting a disappointed tone, Roberts condemns the Australian government’s decision to cancel the “incredibly brave” girl’s visa, asserting that this does not align with “national characteristics or ethics.” Immediately, Roberts engenders a sense of unity between himself and readers through the use of inclusive language, stating “[w]e think of ourselves as the land of fair go.” Moreover, through the use of the word “think,” Roberts elicits doubt in readers, implying that the impression of Australia as a place where “courage… [is] admired” and “kindness…is practiced” is perhaps untrue. Instead, Roberts highlights how, despite being in “fear for her life,” the teenage girl was turned away from Australia while “our two most prominent politicians, Scott Morrison and Peter Dutton, are mysteriously quiet.” Here, readers are positioned to feel ashamed of their representative’s inaction, especially as Roberts underscores that their silence left a girl in fear of a “violent patriarchal family,” conjuring a disturbing and unsettling image. In this way, Roberts highlights the disparity between what the public believes Australia’s values to be, and what values are actually reflected through our government’s decisions.
This is further cemented through the image, titled “Leadership,” accompanying the article. On one hand, there is a ship’s steering wheel able to easily move if need be, and on the other, there is a steering wheel being pulled in all different directions by ropes, with screws and springs breaking off. This is representative our current political climate, where, in favour of pushing their own political agenda such as the “anti-immigration voter base,” Morrison and Dutton are abandoning national values, causing the direction of leadership to be strained, dangerously heading towards an iceberg. Here, Roberts evokes fear within readers, reminding them that they are also directed by these politicians, whose actions therefore reflect upon everyone. Furthermore, his description of the same politicians as “stick[ing] their heads in the sand,” serves to emphasise to readers how, through doing nothing, the government has disregarded the core values of acceptance and kindness integral to Australia’s identity. Instead, he extols Canada as being the “land of the fair go,” for granting asylum to this girl, leaving readers questioning which country really upholds its national ethics.