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Mulan

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Mulans superb english q.s
« on: August 21, 2010, 08:10:51 pm »
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can you start an essay with a rhetorical q.?

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« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 08:13:51 pm »
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Short answer: yes. There is no one set way to write an essay. If it floats your boat, then use it (rhetorical questions at the start or anywhere in the middle of an essay can be very effective).
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« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 11:55:45 pm »
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okidoki :)
also,

are these good arguments for this essay topic on Macbeth:
Macbeth is a man; therefore he is the character most capable of violence. Is this what Shakespeare says?

1. Macbeth is physically violent because he continues with his stance on murdering people
HOWEVER
2. Lady Macbeth and Witches: influential in violence and they too are also "violent" especially wen Lady Macbeth says "unsex me"  and also shows her evilness in the dagger scene.
3. Macduff and other male character are also quite hostile. Macduff was the one who killed Macbeth so ultimately HE is the most capable in violence. Plus the witches tried to warn Macbeth of Macduff, hence Shakespeare is hinting bravery / violence within this respect.

Do they relate back to the topic?
Oh and how should my intro start. :)

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Re: Mulans superb english q.s
« Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 09:08:41 am »
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You might want to devote some part of your essay to considering what makes somebody "capable of violence" and whether that's reserved for male characters. The unsex me now scene is a good one to use.

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« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2010, 01:54:52 am »
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ohhhh okidoki.
i shall.
thanks :)

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« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2010, 08:26:43 pm »
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sorry to disturb. but got an urgent RE essay due tomorrow.
If you can be bothered, pleaseeee help me restructure my amateur introduction :)

Topic: DISCUSS THE GOSPEL VALUES AND HOW THESE MIGHT APPLY TO REAL LIFE SITUATIONS IN WHICH YOUNG PEOPLE MUST MAKE DECISIONS ACCORDING TO THEIR CONSCIENCE.

MY INTRO: Many of the right choices the youth make today, are determined by the essence of Christian values. Theses fundamental values include compassion, courage, forgiveness and love. We need compassion to be able to make choices in life so we will not hurt others, courage to be able to make sacrifices, forgiveness to maintain those relationships that matter to us most and trust so we can make sure that we make those decisions for the right people.

RATING OUT OF 10?


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« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2010, 09:49:43 pm »
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Gospel is an attempt to preach the virtuosity of faith's domain. It is the unremittingly fundamental extension of one's trust towards some esoteric belief system; one belonging to the realms of ethereal existence. These values assert the quintessential for exercising absolution from renounced evils, the denunciation of which requires dedication, forbearance and perseverance. The youth of our society - children, juvenile youngsters, adolescents, fledgling adults exist in under the saturation of worldly exposures. These can range from the lesser misgivings to the downright Satanic. Suffice to say, an inexhaustible reserve of popular pervasive antagonistic influences include domestic violence, substance abuse, illicit conduct and other behavioural misdemeanours. And these exemplary perturbations are as yet still within civil jurisdiction. Presiding rule of law and its inability to resolve these perennial matters presents a dilemma of conscience. Being young means being vulnerable. Vulnerable to the suggestive, attractive luring of insidious sources. The Gospel is a cause which seeks to equip the uninitiated novice with sanitised values, norms and ethos. It provides them with the tools which purvey moral fortitude and ethical subsistence the necessity of which goes towards ensuring spiritual survival.

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« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2010, 10:22:49 pm »
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WOAHHH...once again you exceed my expectations :)
THANKS!!!!!!!!! XD
LOL, how do you learn how to write so good?
wat are you doign at uni btw, and if you dont mind i think im going to copyright the whole thing you just written...A++++ FOR ME! X]

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« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 10:27:32 pm »
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A++++ FOR ME! X]

more like 0/10...

you do realise most of that makes no sense, right?
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« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 10:33:43 pm »
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wahh? ahhh well-
wait...pooshwaltzer, i dont see the connection with how the bible helps us make decisions.
D:

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« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2010, 10:48:24 pm »
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1. Feel free to reuse any of the crap I post on these boards. They're written on the fly therefore originality can pretty much be taken as a guarantee.

2. I'm a Commerce tutor at UoM but literature and linguistics is a side hobby. I also tutor English/ESL if you've yet to notice. *Caveat: Advertisement.*

3. More than a few posters here regard myself as being FoS. That's fine and dandy. Just be prepared to back it up. Refutation of evidential justification only serves to proffer confirmation of non sequitur trolling.


RE: "i dont see the connection with how the bible helps us make decisions".

I was hoping you weren't attending a religious nutjob Christian school. Deliberately left out any reference to holy scriptures - Bible, Quran, Kama Sutra et al - in order to maintain some degree of objectivity and keep par distance from any particular religious congregation. The Bible enables us to carry out just decisions just like any other set of codified conduct, legal and otherwise. It prescribes a set of requirements which serve as rules governing one's action and behaviour; albeit notwithstanding the enforceability precedence held under man made rule of law. The Bible is regulation as are civil and common jurisprudence. The former pertains to ethics and morality; the latter the founding premise of modern civilisation.

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Re: Mulans superb english q.s
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2010, 10:57:01 pm »
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1. Feel free to reuse any of the crap I post on these boards. They're written on the fly therefore originality can pretty much be taken as a guarantee.

2. I'm a Commerce tutor at UoM but literature and linguistics is a side hobby. I also tutor English/ESL if you've yet to notice. *Caveat: Advertisement.*

3. More than a few posters here regard myself as being FoS. That's fine and dandy. Just be prepared to back it up. Refutation of evidential justification only serves to proffer confirmation of non sequitur trolling.


RE: "i dont see the connection with how the bible helps us make decisions".

I was hoping you weren't attending a religious nutjob Christian school. Deliberately left out any reference to holy scriptures - Bible, Quran, Kama Sutra et al - in order to maintain some degree of objectivity and keep par distance from any particular religious congregation. The Bible enables us to carry out just decisions just like any other set of codified conduct, legal and otherwise. It prescribes a set of requirements which serve as rules governing one's action and behaviour; albeit notwithstanding the enforceability precedence held under man made rule of law. The Bible is regulation as are civil and common jurisprudence. The former pertains to ethics and morality; the latter the founding premise of modern civilisation.

hmms thanks anyways.. all that work was much appreciated :)

btw i dont go to a "religious nutjob Christian school". and why doesn't the link on your sig work??

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« Reply #12 on: August 25, 2010, 11:01:35 pm »
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Drat. My webpage needs updating. Signature should work now as it links to my VCENotes shameless self-promotional advert...

http://vcenotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=25965.msg263138#msg263138

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Re: Mulans superb english q.s
« Reply #13 on: August 25, 2010, 11:10:34 pm »
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MULAN IS FUNNY

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« Reply #14 on: August 25, 2010, 11:44:43 pm »
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chemistry q. (didnt know how to change the thread's title):
how do you balance this equation...(im getting different answers from different people :\)?
NO2 + H20 ---> HNO3 + NO

:)