Hey!! I attended a few lectures with ATARnotes this past week and only just found out about these forums! in particular, elyse showed me this thread and I'm very interested in using it more often
I was set a homework task to write an essay on "Assess the extent to which the categories of crime reflect moral and ethical standards". Our teacher gave us all the relevant information needed for a few of the paragraphs... but we were required to write the intro, 1st body paragraph and conclusion from scratch.
Was just wondering if you could read through to see if it made sense and if I was answering the question effectively?
HERE it is:
Introduction
The categories of crime are largely effective in reflecting the moral and ethical standards of the community but somewhat lack effectiveness in representing these standards for certain drug offences. Moral and ethical standards are demonstrated in the categories of crime through the formation and enforcement of the Crimes Act 1900 legislation, comprising of the categories of crime to protect the community. However, there has been great debate and rhetoric in the effectiveness of convicting drug offences to protect the greater society at large as the laws fundamental aim. The debate addresses whether drug offences are merely a self-imposed act to only harm the individual and not the greater community at large. In this way, the categories of crime mostly reflect moral and ethical standards but may lack the accurate representation of these standards on the category of drug offences.
Paragraph on offences against the personOffences against the person involve some form of harm inflicted on an individual, consequently making it a significant offence under the categories of crime to reflect the moral and ethical standards of society. This is demonstrated through inclusion of such offences in the Crimes Act (1900) ,which comprises of the categories of crime to protect individuals and the greater community. Society’s unacceptance of the unlawful killing of a person sees murder as the most serious offence, often resulting in convicted offenders receiving heavy punishments and substantial jail-time. This is evident in the case of R v Milat (1996) where the accused was sentenced to penal servitude for life. Additionally, Homicide is categorised under 5 offences that are all recognised in the Crimes Act 1900 to reflect the moral and ethical standards of society as it protects the community at large. This highlights the categories of crime as a pure reflection of moral and ethical standards. Additionally assault and sex offences, such as sexual assault, are regarded by society as crimes that can inflict physical and psychological harm to a person in an unlawful way. This is demonstrated in the case of R v Scaf (2002), where one of the accused, Bilal Scaf, was sentenced to 31 years imprisonment. Scaf was moved to maximum security in Goulburn Goal after prison officers uncovered plans by his fellow inmates, at the Long Bay Correction Centre, to inject him with HIV-infected blood. As a result, the inclusion of sexual assault and its various relevant categories, exemplify the categories of crime as a reflection of moral and ethical standards, even amongst inmates. In this way, the categories of crime evidently reflect moral and ethical standards to protect both the individual and the community.
Paragraph on drug offences - alcohol
While many of the offences against the person reflect contemporary moral and ethical standards, it could be argued that the same is not true for certain drug offences. Currently, some drugs that cause harm are illegal, such as heroin and cannabis, while others, such as alcohol and tobacco, are not illegal. The National Drug Strategy Household Survey (2013) (NDSHS) found that 40% of Australians consider the excessive use of alcohol to be the “drug issue that people feel is of the most concern to the general community”. In addition, 26% of Australians over the age of 14 had been a victim of an alcohol-related incident and around 8% had experienced physical abuse from an alcohol-affected person. However, the same survey found that “the most supported policy to reduce alcohol harm was to establish more severe penalties for drink driving (85%) followed by stricter enforcement of the law against supplying to minors (84%)”. This would suggest that although alcohol is perceived to be of the most concern, society’s values and ethics accept alcohol as a legitimate drug that requires regulation, rather than criminalisation.
Paragraph on drug offences - tobacco
The NDSHS also noted that tobacco is the major cause of cancer in Australia, accounting for about 20-30% of cancer cases. However, as tobacco usage has declined significantly between 2010 and 2013 (from 15% to 12% of people aged 14 and older), people are less inclined to perceive it as a drug of most concern to the general community. The survey also found that society supports policies aimed at reducing harm and preventing supply to minors, with around 90% of people supporting such causes. Additionally, while the harm caused by tobacco is great, there is no evidence to suggest the public would support tobacco’s criminalisation. This would suggest that society’s values and ethics are represented in current drug offences, to the extent they do not criminalise alcohol and tobacco
Paragraph on drug offences – cannabis etcAdditionally, the criminalisation of drugs such as cannabis fail to deter individuals due to the ambiguity of the law and its disregard by society. In 2013, a study by the NDSHS found that around 42% of people in Australia aged 14 years or older had illicitly used drugs with almost 3 million of these people using these drugs in the last 12 months. These statistics suggest that the uses of illicit drugs are mostly common within the broader society. Another finding was the statistics in regards to victims involved in drug-related incidents. A huge 8.3% of the population had been in a drug-related incident, with verbal abuse being the most frequently reported incident reported overall. Within this number 3.1% had experienced some form of physical abuse under the influence of illicit drugs. These proportions are significantly less than the equivalent for alcohol. In addition, a 2012 article from ‘The Conversation’ by Alison Ritter, Professor & Specialist in Drug Policy at UNSW Australia, highlighted the public’s opinion on the support of the decriminalising of cannabis. The recent national survey found that 80% of Australians support the decriminalisation of cannabis. The enormous figure demonstrates the notion that, despite the harm caused by drugs; it is not a factor that causes harm as great as tobacco and alcohol. The report also suggested that a large proportion of the population has consumed such substances and an overwhelming number support the criminalisation of some illicit drugs. In this way, it can be argued that the category of drug offences, primarily in relation to cannabis, is not a reflection of a number of Australians morals and ethics.
ConclusionThe categories of crime are mostly a reflection of the Australian society’s morals and ethical values but arguably lack the appropriate representation of a large number of Australians views towards drug offences primarily involving cannabis. Offences against the person is a category of crime that reflects the moral and ethical standards of society at large demonstrated through inclusion of such offences in the Crimes Act 1900 legislation. However with certain drug offences it is certain that this is not the case. Society’s values and ethics are represented in current drug offences; to the extent they do not criminalise alcohol and tobacco. This extends to the notion that whilst alcohol is perceived to be of the most concern, society’s values and ethics accept alcohol and tobacco as drugs that require regulation rather than criminalisation. However, the criminalisation of drugs such as cannabis fail to deter individuals due to the ambiguity of the law and its disregard by society. The recent national survey found that 80% of Australians support the decriminalisation of cannabis creating the argument that certain categories of drug offences, primarily in relation to cannabis, fail to reflect a number of Australians values and ethics. In this way, the categories of crime mostly accomplish an accurate representation of the moral and ethical standards of society but lack this accuracy in relation to drug offences. This issue requires rectification through law reform to reflect the current societies moral and ethical standards in order to balance the rights of the individual and the needs of the state.